Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

同學(xué)們，計(jì)算機(jī)在我們的學(xué)習(xí)和生活中起著非常重要的作用，它是二十世紀(jì)一項(xiàng)非常偉大的發(fā)明。那么，你對(duì)計(jì)算機(jī)的起源和發(fā)展了解多少呢？請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表寫一篇英語短文，介紹一下計(jì)算機(jī)的發(fā)展變化，并簡單介紹一下計(jì)算機(jī)的用處。

要求：

1. 語句通順，語意連貫；

2. 不少于80詞。

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Answer 1

【答案】Computers play a very important role in our daily life. Do you know the history and changes of computers?The first computer was invented in 1946. At that time, it was very huge and as big as a house.

As the computer develops, it is now a very good helper in our daily life. Through it, we can store information and send messages to other people. We can also listen to music on computers and play computer games to relax ourselves.

It is difficult to imagine what our life would be like if we had no computers. In my opinion, computers have changed our life completely.

【解析】【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如in our daily life，at that time，as big as，listen to music on computers，in my opinion，other people等。而As the computer develops, it is now a very good helper in our daily life./ Through it, we can store information and send messages to other people./It is difficult to imagine what our life would be like if we had no computers.等多種句式的運(yùn)用更是為文章增色不少。