Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)。

同學(xué)們，你們的家里有沒(méi)有一些小家規(guī)呢?比如父母要求你必須干什么。不能干什么。請(qǐng)以“My Family Rules”為題寫一篇小短文。

Answer 1

【答案】My family rules

There are many rules in my house. I have to get up at six o'clock and be home at 6:30pm.I have to finish my homework after school.I can't watch TV and play computer games on school nights. I have to stay at home on school nights . Also,I have to do some housework.

My parents don’t allow me to stay up until 11:00 pm because they think teenagers may let their friend talk them into doing bad things . I think the most strict rule is that my parents do not allow me to watch TV at night ,although it is good for me ,I think it is a good way to have a rest . Though I don’t agree with some rules, I know my parents love me so I always obey my family rules.

【解析】

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)，例如in my house，have to，get up，be home，finish my homework，after school，watch TV，stay at home，on school nights，do some housework，allow sb. to do，stay up，at night，be good for sb.，have a rest，agree with等。而My parents don’t allow me to stay up until 11:00 pm because they think teenagers may let their friend talk them into doing bad things . / I think the most strict rule is that my parents do not allow me to watch TV at night ,although it is good for me ,I think it is a good way to have a rest ./ Though I don’t agree with some rules, I know my parents love me so I always obey my family rules等復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)從句的運(yùn)用，使本文內(nèi)容豐富，表達(dá)流暢，是短文的最大亮點(diǎn)。