Question

請(qǐng)以“My hometown”為題，用英文寫(xiě)一篇60詞的短文介紹自己的家鄉(xiāng)。要點(diǎn)如下：

1. 我的家鄉(xiāng)是一座美麗的現(xiàn)代化城市，在長(zhǎng)江以南。

2. 安靜，空氣新鮮。到處有綠樹(shù)，鮮花，我們能聽(tīng)到鳥(niǎo)叫，聞到花香。

3. 這兒的人很友好，他們樂(lè)于助人，

4. 今年將會(huì)有地鐵，既便宜又快捷。

5. 我的感受。

注意：我的感受用一兩句話來(lái)表達(dá)。

My Hometown

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Answer 1

My Hometown

My hometown is a beautiful city. It is south of the Yangtze River. It is quiet. The air is fresh. There are many green trees and flowers here. We can hear the birds singing and smell the flowers. People here are helpful and kind. There will be an underground this year. It will be cheap and fast. I like my hometown. I hope my hometown will be better.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇給材料的作文，讓學(xué)生寫(xiě)的是關(guān)于自己家鄉(xiāng)的變化和美好的未來(lái)，所以這篇文章的時(shí)間有些跨度，需要學(xué)生會(huì)適時(shí)地使用不同的時(shí)態(tài)來(lái)表達(dá)短文的大意；要注意句子的主語(yǔ)的變化及主謂一致的問(wèn)題。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】短文用了一些短語(yǔ)和句式，增加了文章的色彩如：It is south of the Yangtze River. We can hear the birds singing and smell the flowers. I hope my hometown will be better.等，這里用了連詞and和that，使句子結(jié)構(gòu)更加復(fù)雜。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。