Question

3．假如你是圖片中的人物，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)圖畫(huà)內(nèi)容及所給提示，完成下面的日記．字?jǐn)?shù)不少于20．

June 7th        Tuesday                                                   Sunny
I got up late this morning．My alarm clock didn't work．When I woke up，it was 7：10． So I washed my face quickly and run to the bus stop without breakfast． By the time I got there，I missed the school bus because it had already gone．So I had to walk to school．Finally，when I got to school，it was already 9：10． I was late for class． When the teacher asked for my homework．I found I had left it at home． What a bad day it was!
One possible version．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖畫(huà)作文．內(nèi)容是根據(jù)圖示寫(xiě)一篇日記，注意日記的格式．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般過(guò)去時(shí)．人稱(chēng)主要為第一人稱(chēng)．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
描述圖畫(huà)；7：10醒來(lái)，錯(cuò)過(guò)校車(chē)，遲到，作業(yè)落在家里
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
get up 起床
wake up 醒來(lái)
be late for 遲到
by the time到…時(shí)候?yàn)橹?br />【高分句型】
1．①So I washed my face quickly and run to the bus stop ②without breakfast．
①so表示所以，不能和because連用．
②without除了，沒(méi)有…，介詞，后加名詞代詞或動(dòng)名詞．
2．①By the time I got there，I missed the school bus②because it had already gone．
①by the time到…時(shí)候?yàn)橹�，引�?dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句．
②because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句．
3．①When the teacher asked for my homework．I found②I had left it at home．
①when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句
②found后是省略了that的賓語(yǔ)從句．

解答 June 7th        Tuesday                       Sunny
   I got up late this morning．My alarm clock didn't work．When I woke up，it was 7：10． So I washed my face quickly and run to the bus stop without breakfast．【高分句型】By the time I got there，I missed the school bus because it had already gone．【高分句型】So I had to walk to school．Finally，when I got to school，it was already 9：10． I was late for class． When the teacher asked for my homework．I found I had left it at home．（描述圖畫(huà)）【高分句型】What a bad day it was!（感想）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本題實(shí)際是應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作，所給材料是圖畫(huà)較為詳細(xì)，動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真看懂圖畫(huà)確定寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容，注意不能遺漏要點(diǎn)．根據(jù)要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容可知要用簡(jiǎn)單句，包括主系表結(jié)構(gòu)，主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)等．根據(jù)所給內(nèi)容本文人稱(chēng)主要是第一人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)為一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)．寫(xiě)作時(shí)要靈活運(yùn)用，注意主謂一致，單詞拼寫(xiě)正確，尤其要注意短文開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾日記的書(shū)寫(xiě)格式．