Question

請以“My favourite”為題寫一篇短文，內容包括：

1．讀書是我最喜歡做的事；

2．我喜歡讀書是受媽媽的影響；

3．讀書是我生命的一部分，我離不開書；

4．詞數(shù)：100詞左右．

Answer 1

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解析：

學生：習作： My Favourite 　　Do you like enjoying reading? It is my favourite. 　　When I was a four-years-old(X1) girl, My mother often told me stories before I went to bed. I enjoyed the storied and asked her where had she got(X2) so many stories, “From books” was my mother's answer. From then on, I became interested in books. 　　Books are my best friends. I have spent most of my free time, reading different kinds of books. 　　On Sunday night, I was sitting on my bed, reading an interesting book. The book was very(X3) good that I didn't put it away until I finished reading it. As soon as I lied(X4) down, I heard the clock striking three. Oh, it was three o'clock of the next day. 　　Reading is an important part of my Life. I can't leave books as fish can't leave water. 　　剖析：1．表示數(shù)量的復合形容詞作前置定語時，其中名詞常用單數(shù)，因此此句中的four-years-old應改為four-year-old． 　　2．賓語從句用陳述句語序，即“主語+謂語”，因此應改為Where she had got． 　　3．so…that“如此…以至于”，因此，應把very改為so． 　　4．lie作“說謊”解是規(guī)則動詞，而作為“躺、放”解是不規(guī)則動詞，所以此處lied要改為lay(lie“躺”的過去式為lay)． 　　總評：這篇習作層次分明，作文流暢，緊扣主題，充分體現(xiàn)了作者渴求知識的內心世界，不僅交代了喜愛讀書的原因，而且還講述了自己一個只顧讀書以致廢寢忘食的故事．把書比作“朋友”和“老師”，使文章顯得十分生動形象，但語序、習慣搭配還必須引起注意．