Question

基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作

請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下的情景說(shuō)明和寫(xiě)作要求，使用5個(gè)規(guī)范的英語(yǔ)句子描述全部所給的信息內(nèi)容．

[寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容]

陳林是某市第一中學(xué)高三年級(jí)一班的學(xué)生．他在該校學(xué)習(xí)已近五年．他們學(xué)校前面有條大河．過(guò)去河水清潔．但前年河對(duì)面建了一個(gè)化工廠，這個(gè)工廠把污水排到河里，致使河水發(fā)黑、發(fā)臭．該廠噪聲也很大．這種情況嚴(yán)重地影響了學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)、休息和健康．因此，在夏天來(lái)臨之際；請(qǐng)你以陳林的名義寫(xiě)信給市長(zhǎng)．要求市長(zhǎng)采取措施，更好地關(guān)心學(xué)生的健康．

[寫(xiě)作要求]

1．必須使用5個(gè)句子介紹全部所給的內(nèi)容(不包括已經(jīng)給出的句子)；

2．短文必須包含所有內(nèi)容；不得在信中使用自己的真實(shí)姓名和地址；

3．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)或感受，使其連貫完整．

［評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)］

概括的準(zhǔn)確性、語(yǔ)言的規(guī)范性、內(nèi)容的合適性以及篇章的連貫性．

Dear Mr．Mayor,

　　I am a senior student in a middle school．I am writing to ask you for help．________

　　Thank you．

Yours,

Wang Li

Answer 1

答案：
解析：

Dear Mr．Mayor, 　　I am a senior student in a middle school．I am writing to ask you for help．I have been studying here for five years and there is a big river in front of our school, the water in it used to be very clean．However, a chemical works was set up on the other side of the river the year before last, and the waste water from the factory runs into the river without being made clean and makes the water dirty and smells terrible, what’s more, the factory gives off loud noises．What’s worse, the pollution has brought us great harm in our life．We can hardly study and live normally．Now summer is coming, I hope you can do something to help us． 　　Thank you． Yours, Wang Li