Question

【題目】寫(xiě)作。

提示：你們班將于期中考試后參觀揚(yáng)州名勝。請(qǐng)你以班長(zhǎng)的名義寫(xiě)一封信，向全班同學(xué)發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)，并對(duì)行程和交通工具做出安排。

要點(diǎn)：1. 上午8：00 校門(mén)口集合上車(chē)；參觀瘦西湖(the Slender West Lake)，個(gè)園( the Bamboo Garden)并拍照。

2. 中飯后，到茱萸灣(the Zhu yu Park) 看熊貓并欣賞美景；

3. 傍晚，到東關(guān)街購(gòu)物，品嘗揚(yáng)州小吃， 在DIY商店學(xué)做水果色拉。

4. 每人費(fèi)用100元。參觀后會(huì)把照片放在網(wǎng)上供同學(xué)們?yōu)g覽。

5．希望每個(gè)同學(xué)會(huì)喜歡本次旅行并玩得開(kāi)心。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

2. 邀請(qǐng)信須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使其連貫、通順。

Dear classmates,

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I hope all of you will ha ve a good time then.

Best wishes

John

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear classmates,

After mid-term exam we’ll visit places of great interest in Yangzhou. At 8:00 a.m. we’ll meet at the school gate and get on the bus. We’ll visit the Slender West Lake and the Bamboo Garden and take some photos.

After dinner, we’ll go to the Zhu Yu Park to see the pandas and enjoy the beautiful scenery.

In the evening, we’ll go to Dongguan Street to do some shopping, enjoy Yangzhou snacks and learn to make a fruit salad in the DIY store.

Remember 100 yuan per person. After the visit I will put the pictures on the Internet for the students to visit.

I hope all of you will ha ve a good time then.

Best wishes

John

【解析】

試題分析：本次作文為話題類(lèi)作文，要求以班長(zhǎng)的名義寫(xiě)一封信，向全班同學(xué)發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)，并對(duì)行程和交通工具做出安排。寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)列出，要求明確，故要完成寫(xiě)作任務(wù)，務(wù)必把各要點(diǎn)表達(dá)清楚。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：本篇范文成功地完成了寫(xiě)作任務(wù)，要點(diǎn)全面，結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。本文應(yīng)用了很多短語(yǔ)使得文章很生動(dòng)，例如places of great interest, take some photos, do some shopping�？傊�，該文是一篇不錯(cuò)的短文。