Question

19．在你成長的過程中，學(xué)校生活給你留下了深刻印象．在你即將初中畢業(yè)之際，校園論壇發(fā)起"創(chuàng)建和諧校園"（Build a Harmonious Campus）的主題活動．假設(shè)你是馬琳，請根據(jù)提示寫一篇80-100詞左右的倡議書，號召大家為創(chuàng)建和諧校園，爭做文明學(xué)生而努力．（開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）
要點提示：
1．愛護(hù)花草樹木，講究衛(wèi)生，美化校園環(huán)境．
2．尊敬師長，友愛互助，誠實守信．
3．努力學(xué)習(xí)，遵守校規(guī)，積極參加各項活動．
Dear Friends，
Our government calls for everyone to try his best to build a harmonious society．
First of all，the students in our school should work hard at our lessons．After school，we'd better take an active part in all kinds of activities to help improve our health and study．
Then we should be friendly to one another．We should respect our teachers and get on well with our classmates．
Thirdly，it is our duty to keep the school yard clean and tidy．We shouldn't throw wastes around or pick flowers．
Please do our best to make our school beautiful．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是寫一篇倡議書號召大家為創(chuàng)建和諧校園，爭做文明學(xué)生而努力．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．愛護(hù)花草樹木，講究衛(wèi)生，美化校園環(huán)境．
2．尊敬師長，友愛互助，誠實守信．
3．努力學(xué)習(xí)，遵守校規(guī)，積極參加各項活動．
常用到的重點短語：
first，then，thirdly首先，然后，第三
study hard努力學(xué)習(xí)
had better do sth最好做某事
be friendly to sb對某人友好
do one's best to do sth 竭盡全力做某事

【高分句型】
1．First，①it is our duty to ②keep the school yard clean and tidy．
①it's one's duty to do sth做某事是某人的職責(zé)，it為形式主語，真正的主語為后面的不定式．
②keep sth+adj使某物保持怎樣的狀態(tài)．
 
2．After school，①we'd better ②take an active part in all kinds of activities ③to ④help improve our health and study．
①had better do sth最好做某事
②take an active part in積極參加
③動詞不定式做為目的狀語．
④help do sth幫助做某事．

解答 Dear Friends，
  Our government calls for everyone to try his best to build a harmonious society．
  As a student，we also need to try our best to build a harmonious campus．First，it is our duty to keep the school yard clean and tidy．【高分句型】We should protect the trees and flowers．We can't pick up flowers and we can't walk on the grass．We shouldn't throw litter here and there．We should make our school beautiful．（愛護(hù)花草樹木，講究衛(wèi)生，美化校園環(huán)境）Then we should be friendly to one another．We should respect our teachers and get on well with our classmates．a(chǎn)nd shouldn't be dishonest．（尊敬師長，友愛互助，誠實守信）Finally，as a student，we should study hard，we should obey the school rules，After school，we'd better take an active part in all kinds of activities to help improve our health and study．（努力學(xué)習(xí)，遵守校規(guī)，積極參加各項活動）【高分句型】
Please do our best to make our school beautiful．

點評 這是一篇給材料作文．本文給出了一些要點，并給出了作文的開頭．我們要做的就是用正確的英語把要點表達(dá)出來，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說出自己的觀點．動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)來寫，要注意主謂一致等問題．寫作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理．