Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)(略)

根據(jù)漢語提示及要求,以Sally’s Dream為題寫一篇短文.

提示: 1.Sally是一個中學(xué)生,她想成為一名職業(yè)演員.

2.她同時也是一名志愿者,經(jīng)常參加一些志愿者服務(wù)活動,業(yè)余時間她還上表演課.

3.現(xiàn)在她遇到了一些麻煩,無錢上表演課.她想出了許多辦法,如: 打電話給家長、主動輔導(dǎo)孩子的美術(shù)、張貼啟事尋找工作掙錢等。

4．問題解決了，她可以繼續(xù)上課了，她的夢想會實現(xiàn)的。

要求：1、條理清晰，語句通順，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范。

2、不少于80個單詞。

Sally’s Dream

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Answer 1

【答案】

Sally is a middle school student; she wants to become a professional actor. She is also a volunteer, often takes part in some volunteer service activities. In her spare time, she also has acting lessons.

But she has some trouble now. She had no money for the acting lessons. She has come up with many ways to solve the problem. She made a phone call to the parents to help children's art. Also, she posted notice to find work to earn money.

So far, the problem has been solved and she can continue to have her classes. I hope that her dream will come true.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，所給內(nèi)容十分詳細(xì)，在組織文章時注意時態(tài)和句式結(jié)構(gòu)正確就可以了。提醒學(xué)生注意用一些短語或句子來使上下文讀起來流暢。。當(dāng)然我們要盡量使用一些好的句型和連詞，使文章上下文意思連貫，更出彩。

寫作亮點：這篇短文注意到了敘述事件時的時態(tài)變化，能適當(dāng)?shù)倪\用連詞和國定短語。文章要點全，幾乎沒有語病錯誤。能適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，文中使用一些好的句型如：she wants to become a professional actor；She made a phone call to the parents to help children's art.，增強(qiáng)了文章的連貫性。