Question

20．廣州目前出現(xiàn)了灰霾天氣（haze weather），我們的自然環(huán)境質(zhì)量已經(jīng)成為一個重要問題，假如你是Rose，是番禺區(qū)的一名初中生，請根據(jù)下面的提示向廣州市環(huán)保局局長寫一封以建設美麗廣州為主題的倡議信．
1．原因：汽車和工廠排放有害的氣體，部分樹木被砍伐，污水被排入河里，大街上可見丟棄的垃圾．
2．嚴重性：污染的空氣對人類的健康十分有害．
3．相應措施：我們應采取行動解決環(huán)境問題，保持環(huán)境干凈，多種植樹木，公眾場合不允許吸煙．
4．你的一至兩個建議．
注意：1．詞數(shù)80詞左右（文章開頭已給出，不計入詞數(shù)）；
2．不得透露學校、姓名等任何個人信息，否則不予評分．
Dear Director，
I'm a junior student named Rose from Panyu District．
                                            
Sincerely yours，
Rose．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：Therefore it's important to reduce the environmental pollution because they can lead to health problems．因此減少環(huán)境污染是很重要的，因為它們會導致健康問題．it is+形容詞+to do sth句型
句型二：To make Guangzhou a beautiful city．使廣州成為一個美麗的城市．不定式to make做目的狀語．

解答 Dear Director，
      I'm a junior student named Rose from Panyu District．Recently，the haze weather appears in Guangzhou，the quality of our natural environment has become an important problem，environmental protection and building beautiful Guangzhou have become hot topics too．In Guangzhou，cars and factories produce harmful gases，some trees are cut down，dirty water is poured into the river，we can find rubbish in the street．The polluted air does great harm to people's health．Therefore it's important to reduce the environmental pollution because they can lead to health problems【高分句型一】．To make Guangzhou a beautiful city【高分句型二】，we should take actions to deal with our environmental problems，we should keep our environment clean and plant more trees．Also，smoking should not be allowed in public．In my opinion，calling on more and more people to pay attention to the environmental protection is important too．If we do the things above，Guangzhou will become more and more beautiful．
                                                                                                                        Sincerely yours，
                                                                                                                                 Rose．

點評 在寫作時需要明確寫作要點，注意寫作中人稱和時態(tài)的使用，做到思路清晰，句式靈活，表達流暢，所以平時應多注意�？嫉淖魑男问�，積累相關的短語和詞匯．