Question

10．請描述近幾年你的家鄉(xiāng)的發(fā)展變化情況，靈活運(yùn)用一般過去時，現(xiàn)在完成時及其他時態(tài)，文體不限，要求80個單詞左右．
提示：進(jìn)步，發(fā)展，高樓更多，路更寬，人更多，新開發(fā)的區(qū)域（new-developed area），新建地鐵（subway）等．
My home town is a beautiful place．It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice．But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town．Many people had no work．They lived a hard life．（陳述以前的情況，和后面的變化成對比）
My hometown was liberated．Since then great changes have taken place there．The streets have been widened．Factories，schools，hospitals，cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another．The life of the people is greatly improved．（用事實(shí)說明變化）
　　I love my hometown．All the more I love its people．【高分句型一】They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful．【高分句型二】．People can take a bus or a taxi to everywhere．But the air is not as fresh as before．People aware of protecting the environment is very important．（倡導(dǎo)人們要保護(hù)環(huán)境）．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：All the more I love its people我更愛家鄉(xiāng)的人．定語從句，省略了引導(dǎo)詞that．
句型二：They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful．他們努力工作為了更富有，更漂亮．so as to引導(dǎo)的狀語從句．

解答 My home town is a beautiful place．It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice．But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town．Many people had no work．They lived a hard life．（陳述以前的情況，和后面的變化成對比）
    My hometown was liberated．Since then great changes have taken place there．The streets have been widened．Factories，schools，hospitals，cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another．The life of the people is greatly improved．（用事實(shí)說明變化）
　　I love my hometown．All the more I love its people．【高分句型一】They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful．【高分句型二】．People can take a bus or a taxi to everywhere．But the air is not as fresh as before．People aware of protecting the environment is very important．（倡導(dǎo)人們要保護(hù)環(huán)境）

點(diǎn)評 在寫作時需要明確寫作要點(diǎn)，注意寫作中人稱和時態(tài)的使用，做到思路清晰，句式靈活，表達(dá)流暢，所以平時應(yīng)多注意�？嫉淖魑男问�，積累相關(guān)的短語和詞匯．