Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)（計(jì)15分）
現(xiàn)在汽車越來(lái)越多，對(duì)空氣產(chǎn)生極大影響。某網(wǎng)站在開(kāi)展出行方式大討論。假如你是李雷，你喜歡哪種出行方式？請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示詞語(yǔ)和相關(guān)問(wèn)題，給網(wǎng)站投稿。稿件的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，其詞數(shù)不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
提示詞語(yǔ)：expensive,  relax,  easy,  be good for,  reduce,  save energy
How do you go to school, by car, by bus, by bike or on foot?
Which way is the best?
What are the advantages?
Dear Editor,
I know you are organizing a discussion about the ways of going out. I’m a middle school student and I want to join the discussion.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

Answer 1

Nowadays, you can see more and more people riding bikes on the road and I am one of them. I go to school by bike because I think it’s the best way. Why do I like riding a bike? Let me tell you the reasons.
First, it’s not expensive to buy a bike and I can afford one or more. Second, I can relax myself while riding a bike. It’s good for my health and it’s easy to get a place for a bike. Third, the most important thing is that riding bikes can not only reduce pollution but also save energy. I hope everybody can ride a bike to go to school, go to work and travel to other places.
Let’s ride bikes from now on!

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第一人稱，注意時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】1、固定短語(yǔ)句式的運(yùn)用給作文增色，使其內(nèi)容豐富，不枯燥。如more and more 越來(lái)越多、not only…but also…不僅……而且……,It’s not expensive to buy a bike . 買一輛自行車不貴。It’s good for our health.對(duì)我們的健康有好處。
2、條理清晰，第一段表明我騎自行車，第二段說(shuō)明我愛(ài)騎自行車的原因，最后筆者號(hào)召大家騎自行車。