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3．在日常學(xué)習(xí)和生活中，你一定得到過很多人的幫助和關(guān)愛，此時(shí)此刻你會(huì)有很多感謝的話要說．請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面所給的提示用英語寫一篇短文．
提示：1．感謝的人：親人、老師、同學(xué)…
2．感謝他們的原因：生活方面、學(xué)習(xí)方面…
3．對(duì)他們的美好祝福．
要求：1．內(nèi)容包括所給提示；
2．寫作中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
3．語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；
4．文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)．
In my life，I get lots of help and love from many people．Now，I want to express my thanks to them．First，In my life，Iget lotsof help and love from many people．Now I want to express my thanks to them．First，I want to thank my parents．They provide a happy life for me．They do much for me and give me so much love．Second，I want to thank my teachers．They are always busy doing their work．When I have problems with my study，they are so patient and helpful．Third，I want to thank my classmates．They make me feel less lonely．I will remember the days we play and study together．Thank you，my parents，my teacher and my classmates．I hope you are in good health and have a better future．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是談?wù)勀阍谌粘�學(xué)習(xí)和生活中想要感激的人，以及為什么感謝他們和祝愿．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱和第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．感謝的人：親人、老師、同學(xué)…
2．感謝他們的原因：生活方面、學(xué)習(xí)方面…
3．對(duì)他們的美好祝福．
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
provide sth for sb為某人提供某物
be busy doing sth忙于…
make sb do sth 讓某人做某事
be in good health身體健康

【高分句型】
1．①When I②have problems with my study，they are so patient and helpful．
①when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句．
②have problems with …在某方面有困難

2．I will remember the days we play and study together．
we play and study together是定語從句，修飾先行詞the days，關(guān)系詞which作為從句賓語，故省略．

解答 In my life，I get lots of help and love from many people．Now I want to express my thanks to them．First，I want to thank my parents．They provide a happy life for me．They do much for me and give me so much love．（感謝父母及原因）Second，I want to thank my teachers．They are always busy doing their work．When I have problems with my study，they are so patient and helpful．【高分句型】（感謝老師及原因）Third，I want to thank my classmates．They make me feel less lonely．I will remember the days we play and study together．【高分句型】（感謝同學(xué)及原因）
Thank you，my parents，my teacher and my classmates．I hope you are in good health and have a better future．（美好祝愿）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 以提綱提供情景的作文．要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語法規(guī)則的正確性，就不會(huì)造成審題不清而偏離主題，但要注意，文章必須覆蓋所提供的各個(gè)提綱的要點(diǎn)．行文間要注意簡(jiǎn)化描述，用簡(jiǎn)短的語句代替冗長(zhǎng)的語句．在作文完成的時(shí)候，應(yīng)該檢查、修改，以免遺漏一些需要表達(dá)清楚的要點(diǎn)和細(xì)節(jié)．