Question

【題目】假如你是剛踏入中學(xué)校門的學(xué)生Anne，請根據(jù)提示信息，寫一封郵件給你的筆友Peter，介紹你的校園生活。80詞左右，可以適當發(fā)揮。

提示信息：

1．在七年級三班學(xué)習(xí)，家離學(xué)校很近，每天步行上學(xué)。

2．最喜歡的科目是英語和科學(xué)。很喜歡校園生活。身邊有許多好友。老師們都很友好。

3．擅長唱歌和游泳，課后經(jīng)常參加(take part in)各種各樣的活動(activity)。

4．學(xué)習(xí)很努力，夢想是當一名老師。

Dear Peter,

I'm writing to tell you something about my school life.

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Best wishes,

Anne

Answer 1

【答案】

(One possible version)

Dear Peter,

I'm writing to tell you something about my school life. I study in Class Three, Grade Seven. I live close to my school, so I often go to school on foot. My favourite subjects are English and Science. I enjoy my school life very much and I have many good friends. All my teachers are very friendly. I'm good at singing and swimming, I often take part in different kinds of activities after class. I'm hard-working. My dream is to be a teacher. What about you, Tom?

I hope to hear from you soon.

Best wishes,

Anne

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達要求寫一封回信來介紹自己的校園生活，并談?wù)勛约旱囊恍└惺堋Ｊ紫龋�要認真審題，掌握來信中的信息，需要回答的問題。然后整體把握寫作的大致方向，謀篇布局。結(jié)合來信內(nèi)容可知，回信中需要就安徽的公交服務(wù)去重點描述。寫作中注意上下文的過度，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點：本文行文流暢，語言規(guī)范。各種短語句型表達的使用非常準確，固定短語“be good at doing sth,take part in sth, different kinds of,”以及復(fù)合句“I live close to my school, so I often go to school on foot.的使用，豐富了文章的內(nèi)容，為文章增色不少。