Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格中的提示寫一篇40個(gè)詞左右的英語小短文來介紹你的一位好朋友。開頭部分已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Name	Liu Qinglei
Age	12
Class	Class Five, Grade One
Nationality(國籍)	China
His friend	Betty (English); 13; Class Two
His teacher	Mrs Green (American)

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

I have a good friend. His name is Liu Qinglei. He is 12 years old. He is in Class Five, Grade Two. He is from China. His friend is Betty. She is English. She is 13 years old. She is in Class Two. His teacher is Mrs Green. She is American.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我的朋友。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：His name is…，He is..., His friend is..., She is...等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意主謂一致原則。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我的朋友的名字、年齡，接下來介紹他的朋友Betty，最后介紹了他的老師格林太太。此處good friend, be from, years old等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。