Question

請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列表格中所給信息，以“How to Prevent the Flu”為題寫(xiě)一篇60詞左右的短文，文章開(kāi)頭已給出不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

疾病	the flu
傳播途徑	spread in the air
癥狀	have a high fever, body hurts
建議	drink more boiled water, take enough exercise, keep your hands clean, have enough sleep

How to Prevent the Flu

The flu is a kind of common disease. It spreads easily in the air.

 

 

Answer 1

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How to Prevent the Flu

The flu is a kind of common disease. It spreads easily in the air. If you get the flu, you usually have a high fever and your body hurts. It brings trouble to your life. To fight against it, you must take enough exercise and drink more boiled water every day. You had better keep your hands clean and have enough sleep. You shouldn’t go to crowded places.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹預(yù)防流感的方法。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱(chēng)為第二，三人稱(chēng)，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：If you ......；you must......及You had better ......等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用情態(tài)動(dòng)詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了李干的傳播途徑，接下來(lái)介紹流感的癥狀，最后給出預(yù)防流感的建議。此處用了in the air. fight against，take enough exercise ，keep your hands clean 等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。