Question

11．假設(shè)你是李華，現(xiàn)就讀于某寄宿制中學(xué)．你的室友王明經(jīng)常違反寢室（dormitory）規(guī)定，如不整理床鋪，休息時(shí)間大聲撥打電話，未經(jīng)許可（permission）動(dòng)用他人物品，離開(kāi)寢室不關(guān)燈等．為了提醒他改正不良習(xí)慣，做個(gè)文明室友，你決定寫(xiě)一封電子郵件給他．
要求：（1）包含以上所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；
（2）字?jǐn)?shù)：60-80詞（信得開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不介入總詞數(shù)）；
（3）信中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名，學(xué)校名和地名．

From：HYPERLINK"mailto：lihua2758@sina．com"lihua2758@sina．com To：HYPERLINK"mailto：wangming63@sohu．com"wangming63@sohu．com Subject：To be a great roommate Dear Wang Ming， I'm writing to kindly remind you of the dormitory rules． Best wishes， LiHua

Dear Wang Ming，
I'm writing to kindly remind you of the dormitory rules．As we live in the same room，we are like families thus we should love each other and respect each other．What's more，we should make our room clean and tidy．Therefore，I hope you can read the following rules and obey them．Rule No.1 When you get up in the morning，remember to make the bed．Rule No.2 Don't make phone calls when we are sleeping．Rule No.3 Don't use others'things without permission．Rule No.4 Turn off the lights before you leave the room．I hope all of us can obey these rules and make our room more and more comfortable．
Best wishes，
LiHua．

Answer 1

分析 【解析】此次考查的是"應(yīng)用文---書(shū)信體裁"，難度為★★．根據(jù)要求，需要告知室友必須遵守寢室規(guī)矩，而題目中恰好給出了足夠的提示，并不需要學(xué)生再花時(shí)間去思考，例如：1．不整理床鋪；2．休息時(shí)間大聲撥打電話；3．未經(jīng)許可（permission）動(dòng)用他人物品；4．離開(kāi)寢室不關(guān)燈等．基本只要能夠把這四個(gè)點(diǎn)用正確的句型翻譯出來(lái)并稍加修飾，加上連接詞，整篇文章就成形了．
【參考詞組】
1．respect each other 互相尊重
2．therefore 因此
3．obey the rules 遵守規(guī)定
4．without permission 未經(jīng)允許

解答 Dear Wang Ming，
I'm writing to kindly remind you of the dormitory rules．As we live in the same room，we are like families thus we should love each other and respect each other．What's more，we should make our room clean and tidy．Therefore，I hope you can read the following rules and obey them．Rule No.1 When you get up in the morning，remember to make the bed．Rule No.2 Don't make phone calls when we are sleeping．Rule No.3 Don't use others'things without permission．Rule No.4 Turn off the lights before you leave the room．I hope all of us can obey these rules and make our room more and more comfortable．
Best wishes，
LiHua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考生需抓住寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作，理清寫(xiě)作結(jié)構(gòu)，能夠?qū)ψ约旱目捶ㄕ归_(kāi)分述，最好能用事實(shí)來(lái)進(jìn)行例證．