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【題目】寫作
Tom去年來到大明所在的學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)。在學(xué)習(xí)期間，他對(duì)學(xué)校提倡的“創(chuàng)建和諧校園”活動(dòng)感觸頗深。他發(fā)現(xiàn)該校的學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)主動(dòng)，興趣廣泛，友愛互助，師生之間關(guān)系融洽，人與環(huán)境和諧相處（如：保持環(huán)境衛(wèi)生，愛護(hù)花草樹木，不隨地亂扔廢棄物等）。
1請(qǐng)你以Tom的名義，給遠(yuǎn)在美國的父母寫一封信，介紹學(xué)校的現(xiàn)狀并談?wù)勀愕母惺堋?/span>
2文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名，校名或地名。
3詞數(shù)90左右。
Dear Mum and Dad,
Time flies! I've been here for nearly ayear. I've been here for nearly a year. I'm very pleased to find our school isa good one. The students in our school

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mum and Dad,
Time flies! I've been here for nearly a year. I'm very pleased to find that our school is really a good one. The students in our school work hard at their lessons. They take an active part in activities that help to improve their qualities and health. They are friendly to each other and always ready to help each other.
The teachers here all enjoy their work and they love their students. They work hard and do what they can do to help their students. And the students respect their teachers. They get on well with each other. The students in our school try their best to keep the school yard clean and tidy. They never throw waste about nor pick the flowers.
In a word, I am deeply impressed by the harmonious atmosphere in this school. I love my new school.
Yours,
Tom
【解析】本題要求以Tom 的名義，給遠(yuǎn)在美國的父母寫一封信，介紹學(xué)校的現(xiàn)狀并談?wù)勀愕母惺堋��?dòng)筆前先要注意認(rèn)真閱讀材料，確定寫作內(nèi)容；分析內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞；為豐富文章的文采，可以多用一些復(fù)合句。最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯(cuò)誤，寫好后反復(fù)讀幾遍，適當(dāng)修改。