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8．如今，在同學(xué)們的學(xué)習(xí)和生活中經(jīng)常會(huì)遇到一些麻煩，有時(shí)這讓我們非常煩惱，為此，英語(yǔ)報(bào)開(kāi)辟了以"More Advice，Better Life"為主題的專(zhuān)欄，希望同學(xué)們踴躍提出建議．現(xiàn)請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面表格提示，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，從學(xué)習(xí)和生活兩個(gè)方面談?wù)剳?yīng)該如何去做．

	建議
如何學(xué)習(xí)	1．多請(qǐng)教老師，多和同學(xué)交流； 2．制定學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃，勞逸結(jié)合； …
如何與同學(xué)相處	1．學(xué)會(huì)傾聽(tīng)，尊重對(duì)方； 2．樂(lè)于助人，相互信任； …

注意：1．詞數(shù)80-100；
2．可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；
3．文章的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾以為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
We students always meet with some problems in our study and lifeAnd sometimes those problems can prevent us from moving forward．Now，here is some advice to solve them．
Firstly，we can ask our teachers for help or communicate with ourclassmates whenever we meet problems in our study．Secondly，we can makereasonable study plans so that we can keep a balance between busy study andrest．As for problems in life，first of all，we should respect and trust eachother all the time．Then，we need learn to receive voices from others．Finally，we should never refuse giving our hands to anyone who is in trouble．
No matter what kind of problems we may meet with，let's face them together with our friends，our teachers and our parents．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是談?wù)剳?yīng)該如何學(xué)習(xí)如何與同學(xué)相處．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱(chēng)主要為第一人稱(chēng)．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1如何學(xué)習(xí)1）．多請(qǐng)教老師，多和同學(xué)交流；2）．制定學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃，勞逸結(jié)合；
2如何與同學(xué)相處：1）．學(xué)會(huì)傾聽(tīng)，尊重對(duì)方；2）．樂(lè)于助人，相互信任
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
provent sb from doing sth 阻止某人做某事
ask sb for help尋求某人的幫忙
keep a banlance保持平衡
first of all 首先
in trouble處于困境
【高分句型】
1．Secondly，we can make reasonable study plans ①so that we can②keep a balance③between busy study and rest．
①so that引導(dǎo)的目的狀語(yǔ)從句．
②keep a banlance保持平衡
③between …and …兩者之間
2．Finally，we should never①refuse giving our hands to anyone②who is in trouble．
①refuse doing sth 拒絕做某事
②定語(yǔ)從句，who是關(guān)系詞作為從句的主語(yǔ)，修飾先行詞anyone．in trouble處于困境中

解答 We students always meet with some problems in our study and life．And sometimes those problems can prevent us from moving forward．Now，here is some advice to solve them．
Firstly，we can ask our teachers for help or communicate with our classmates whenever we meet problems in our study．Secondly，we can make reasonable study plans so that we can keep a balance between busy study and rest．【高分句型】（如何學(xué)習(xí)）As for problems in life，first of all，we should respect and trust each other all the time．Then，we need learn to receive voices from others．Finally，we should never refuse giving our hands to anyone who is in trouble【高分句型】．（如何與同學(xué)相處）
No matter what kind of problems we may meet with，let's face them together with our friends，our teachers and our parents．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本文是一篇給材料作文，短文的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出．寫(xiě)作時(shí)先要圍繞這些要點(diǎn)組織材料，確定寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容，注意將這些要點(diǎn)全部表達(dá)出來(lái)，并且要有適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，在談到自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn)時(shí)，要結(jié)合活動(dòng)內(nèi)容，寫(xiě)出自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn)．