Question

【題目】Write at least 60 words about the topic “ When I met with a difficulty”.(以”當我碰到困難時”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。)

(注意:短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名，校名及其它相關信息，否則不予評分。)

Use the following points as a guide.(短文須包含下列要點)

What difficulty did you meet?

How did you overcome it?

How did you feel after you overcame it?

提示: overcome( overcame, overcome) v.克服

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Answer 1

【答案】Every day we are confronted with many difficulties. In my memory, the most unforgettable one happened last term. I was not good at subjects at school and I couldn't get good marks in exams．I felt worried about my study so I decided to work much harder．I listened to the teachers more carefully in class and did more exercises after class．What's more，I often asked my teachers for help．Although I met a lot of difficulties，I didn't give up．Now I have done better in my study．I believe that nothing is too difficult if I put my heart into it．If I meet with difficulties in my life，I should try my best to overcome them．In a word，only the person who overcomes difficulties will be successful

【解析】

這是一篇給材料作文。要求以“ When I met with a difficulty”為題，根據所給出的要點提示寫一篇短文。本文已經給出了主要寫作要點，動筆前要先認真閱讀要點，然后圍繞要點適當發(fā)揮。寫作中，應注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內容利用上；結合材料內容，可知本文主要是第一人稱，時態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)進行敘述。語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。