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5．小明班級(jí)將要出一期"低碳生活"為主題的英語(yǔ)板報(bào)，請(qǐng)小明寫(xiě)一份"低碳生活"的倡議書(shū)，倡議同學(xué)們加入低碳一族．要點(diǎn)如下：
1．節(jié)約用水、用電、用紙；
2．去超市自備購(gòu)物袋；
3．不要購(gòu)買(mǎi)不必要的衣服；
4．步行或騎自行車(chē)上學(xué)；
5…
要求：（1）中心突出，語(yǔ)義連貫，層次清晰，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；
（2）詞數(shù)在80詞左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
參考詞匯：
低碳low-carbon； 一次性的one-off
With the global warming getting worse，more people choose to live a low-carbon life for the purpose of reducing greenhouse gases．As students，we can choose to live a low-carbon life，too．In our daily life，we should save water，electricity and paper．Remember to turn off the water tap or reuse water．We're supposed to use both sides of the paper．We ought to turn off the lights when we leave a room．We can bring our own shopping bags when we go to the supermarket．Don't buy unnecessary clothes because it is a kind of waste．Don't buy cups，bowls or chopsticks which can be used only once．If possible，we'd better go to school on foot or by bike．
Let's take action and be a low-carbon people!
Let's take actions and be a low-carbon people!

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容為倡議你的同學(xué)們加入低碳一族．時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱(chēng)主要為第一人稱(chēng)．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從五方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1．節(jié)約用水、用電、用紙；
2．去超市自備購(gòu)物袋；
3．不要購(gòu)買(mǎi)沒(méi)必要的衣服；
4．步行或騎自行車(chē)上學(xué)．
5．其他
常用到的重點(diǎn)句型和短語(yǔ)：
remember to do sth記得去做某事
be supposed to應(yīng)該
if possible如果可能的話
had better do sth最好做某事
【高分句型】
1．①Don't buy cups，bowls or chopsticks②which can③be used only once．
①否定祈使句，don't+動(dòng)詞原形．
②定語(yǔ)從句，which是關(guān)系詞做從句的主語(yǔ)，修飾前面的cups，bowls or chopsticks．
③情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)：情態(tài)動(dòng)詞+be+過(guò)去分詞．
2．①I(mǎi)f possible，②we'd better go to school on foot or by bike．
①if possible如果可能的話，省略句，完整表達(dá)是if it is possible．
②had better do sth最好做某事

解答 With the global warming getting worse，more people choose to live a low-carbon life for the purpose of reducing greenhouse gases．
As students，we can choose to live a low-carbon life，too．In our daily life，we should save water，electricity and paper．Remember to turn off the water tap or reuse water．We're supposed to use both sides of the paper．We ought to turn off the lights when we leave a room．（節(jié)約用水、用電、用紙）We can bring our own shopping bags when we go to the supermarket．（去超市自備購(gòu)物袋））Don't buy unnecessary clothes because it is a kind of waste．（不要購(gòu)買(mǎi)沒(méi)必要的衣服）Don't buy cups，bowls or chopsticks which can be used only once．【高分句型】（其它：不買(mǎi)一次性的碗筷）If possible，we'd better go to school on foot or by bike．（步行或騎自行車(chē)上學(xué)）【高分句型】
     Let's take action and be a low-carbon people!（號(hào)召）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇作文由于提綱材料本身決定了寫(xiě)作對(duì)象、范圍、目的、體裁等，命題者的意圖往往較容易領(lǐng)悟，考生在審題上一般不會(huì)出現(xiàn)障礙．可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)提示運(yùn)用相關(guān)的句型結(jié)構(gòu)靈活的展開(kāi)作文．考生需注意不要逐詞逐句地進(jìn)行翻譯，所寫(xiě)句子要符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣．