Question

【題目】書面表達（滿分20分）

時光飛逝，三年初中生活馬上就要結(jié)束了。假如你被邀請在畢業(yè)典禮上演講，你想表達你對母校、老師、同學(xué)和父母的感恩之情，請根據(jù)下表所列要點，用英語寫一篇短文。

感恩對象	存欄記憶	未來與祝福
母校	美麗校園，快樂家園	越來越好
老師	工作努力，教授知識，有困難時及時給予幫助	銘記在心
同學(xué)	幫助我學(xué)習(xí)、相處和睦	保持聯(lián)系
父母	關(guān)心照料，幫助我們成長	永遠健康開心

注意：1.詞數(shù)：不少于80詞；2. 短文中不得提及真實人名、校名及地名；

3. 短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好（不計入總詞數(shù)）。

參考詞匯： 永遠 forever

Dear head teacher, teachers, parents and fellow students,

Good afternoon. Thank you for giving me a chance to make a speech here. How time flies! We’re just leaving you—our lovely junior high school. I have so many words from my heart to say. _________________________________________________________________________

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Thanks, all my loved ones. All the best to you ! Goodbye!

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear head teacher, teachers, parents and fellow students,

Good afternoon. …I have so many words from my heart to say.

First，I’d like to say “Thanks” to my dear school. You are a beautiful and happy home for us all. I hope you will be better and better. Second, I must say “Thank you” to our dear teachers. You always work hard and have taught us lots of knowledge .You have helped us when we are in trouble. I’ll remember you forever. Then I will say “Thank you” to my dear classmates. You really help me with my study. We have got on well with each other just like sisters and brothers. Let’s keep in touch in the future. Finally, thank you, my parents. You’ve taken good care of me and helped me grow up. I hope you will be healthy and happy forever.

Thanks, all my loved ones. All the best to you ! Goodbye!

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇演講稿，內(nèi)容要點已經(jīng)給出，學(xué)生寫作的時候切入點容易找。內(nèi)容貼近學(xué)生生活，可以有感而發(fā)。要求學(xué)生作文涵蓋所有要點，并做適當(dāng)補充或者拓展，使用多種句型和高級詞匯，在個人觀點方面要緊扣主題，觀點明確，做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。要仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點。要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；語言表達要符合英語習(xí)慣。

寫作亮點：本范文層次清楚，條理文明，包含了提綱所列的所有要點。畢業(yè)了，作為畢業(yè)生對母校、老師、同學(xué)最想說的是什么，是“感謝”。本文以“thanks”貫穿全文，既突出了作者寫作主題，又使文章內(nèi)容顯得脈絡(luò)清晰，重點突出。演講稿極具號召力和感染力。