Question

【題目】書面表達。(滿分20分）

請你寫一篇作文，描寫你的家鄉(xiāng)近幾年來的變化。從馬路，建筑物，商店，旅游等方面進行描述。 ( 不少于80詞 )

1.過去，我的家鄉(xiāng)是個貧窮的小鎮(zhèn)，但是河水清澈，空氣清新。人們住在低矮的屋子里。人們常常步行或騎自行車去鎮(zhèn)里。

2. 在過去的幾年中， 我的家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)生了很大變化。多數(shù)人搬進了公寓。馬路變寬了，超市也多了。

3. 人們可以坐公共汽車或打的去鎮(zhèn)里。但是空氣不如以前新鮮了，樹也沒以前多了。

4.人們意識到保護環(huán)境是很重要的。

Answer 1

【答案】

In the past, my hometown was very small. People used to live a poor life. The houses used to be old and small. The traffic used to be not convenient, but the mountains were greener, water much cleaner. They enjoyed a clearer sky .Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. People live a better life. Their houses are large and bright. Many people have their own cars. People can take a bus or a taxi to town. But the air is not as fresh as before, so are the trees. Now we all know protecting the environment is very important. I’m sure my hometown will become better and better in the future..

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。要求介紹家鄉(xiāng)的變化。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示，可能會用到過去時態(tài)（used to do ：過去常常）和一般現(xiàn)在時。動筆前要認真審題，勾勒要點，并適當發(fā)揮。行文中要注意人稱、時態(tài)以及主謂一致問題。同時注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點: 這篇短文主要取材于學生身邊發(fā)生的事。在行文過程中，多用簡單句，同時使用一些固定句式和短語，如: used to、the mountains were greener, water much cleaner、great changes have taken place、live a better life、as fresh as、so are the trees等，這為文章增色不少。在學習中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理。