Question

10．請(qǐng)根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示以"Changes in Our Hometown"為題寫一篇80詞左右的短文．
開頭部分已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
要點(diǎn)提示：
1．過去人們得去電影院看電影，現(xiàn)在卻可以在家看VCD和網(wǎng)上看電影．
2．過去人們往往通過寫信來進(jìn)行聯(lián)系，現(xiàn)在人們可以使用手機(jī)和發(fā)e-mail來聯(lián)系．
3．過去人們出門要乘公交車和步行．但現(xiàn)在人們可以乘出租車，甚至一部分人們可以直接開上自己的小車．
Great changes have taken place in our hometown in the last few years．People's life is getting better and better．In the past，people used to see a movie in the cinema，but now they can watch VCD or see an online movie at home．In the past，people used to communicate with each other by writing letters，but now they can use mobile phone or e-mail to communicate．People used to go somewhere by bus or on foot in the past，but now they can take a taxi，some people even have their own cars．In short，changes in our hometown in the last few years have brought us comfort and convenience．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
In the past，people used to see a movie in the cinema，過去，人們?nèi)ル娪霸嚎措娪埃?br />used to do 過去常常．
【高分句型二】
In short，changes in our hometown in the last few years have brought us comfort and convenience．簡言之，我們城鎮(zhèn)過去一些年的改變給我們帶來了舒適和便利．
in short 簡言之

解答 Changes in Our Hometown
Great changes have taken place in our hometown in the last few years．People's life is getting better and better．In the past，people used to see a movie in the cinema，【高分句型一】but now they can watch VCD or see an online movie at home．（過去人們得去電影院看電影，現(xiàn)在卻可以在家看VCD和網(wǎng)上看電影） In the past，people used to communicate with each other by writing letters，but now they can use mobile phone or e-mail to communicate．（過去人們往往通過寫信來進(jìn)行聯(lián)系，現(xiàn)在人們可以使用手機(jī)和發(fā)e-mail來聯(lián)系）People used to go somewhere by bus or on foot in the past，but now they can take a taxi，some people even have their own cars．（過去人們出門要乘公交車和步行．但現(xiàn)在人們可以乘出租車，甚至一部分人們可以直接開上自己的小車．）
In short，changes in our hometown in the last few years have brought us comfort and convenience．【高分句型二】

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