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8．這次考試結(jié)束以后，你將怎樣度過一個(gè)有意義的暑假，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一篇文章給你自己和小伙伴們一些好的建議，內(nèi)容必須包括以下要點(diǎn)：
①走親訪友，和家人一起共度美好時(shí)光．②和好朋友們一起看電影，聽音樂…
③假期我們應(yīng)該加強(qiáng)體育鍛煉，增強(qiáng)體質(zhì)．④你還有什么別的建議（至少兩條）．
要求：
1．字?jǐn)?shù)80-100，不要逐條翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
2．文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名．
3．行文連貫，條理清晰，語(yǔ)句通順，語(yǔ)法正確，書寫規(guī)范．
4．標(biāo)題和開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)．
How to Take a Meaningful Summer Vacation after the Exam
It is necessary to take a meaningful summer vacation after the exam．There are kinds of activities for us to take part in．
                         

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：Second，seeing a film，listening to music or hanging out with our friends will be also wonderful．第二，看電影，聽音樂和朋友閑逛將會(huì)是非常美妙．動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)作主語(yǔ)時(shí)，要用其ing形式，hang out with…，和…閑逛．
高分句型二：What's more，we had better review what we have learned in middle school．更重要的是，我們最好復(fù)習(xí)一下我們?cè)谥袑W(xué)學(xué)過的東西．what's more，更重要的，遞進(jìn)關(guān)系，had better do sth．最好做某事，表示建議；review后面接的是一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句，疑問詞what 提前．
高分句型三：Finally，it is necessary for us to do some housework，which can help our parents a lot．最后，做一些家務(wù)對(duì)我們而言是有必要的，它能給我們的父母幫很多忙．（該句是一個(gè)非限定性定語(yǔ)從句，which can help our parents a lot 是一個(gè)定語(yǔ)來修飾housework．句型It is+adj．for sb．to do sth．做某事是…，句型中It 作形式主語(yǔ)，真正的主語(yǔ)為動(dòng)詞不定式．）

解答 How to Take a Meaningful Summer Vacation after the Exam
    It is necessay to take a meaningful summer vacation after the exam．There are kinds of activities for us to take part in．
    First，we can visit our friends and relatives or spend happy time with our family．Second，seeing a film，listening to music or hanging out with our friends will be also wonderful．（高分句型一）Third，we should take more exercise to keep healthy．What's more，we had better review what we have learned in middle school．（高分句型二） Finally，it is necessary for us to do some housework，which can help our parents a lot．（高分句型三）（分別按順序列舉可以參加的活動(dòng)）
   Above all，I hope all of us can have a pleasant vacation．（最后作總結(jié)）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考生在寫作時(shí)需明確寫作要點(diǎn)，注意寫作中人稱和時(shí)態(tài)的使用，做到思路清晰，句式靈活，表達(dá)流暢，考生在平時(shí)應(yīng)多注意常考的作文形式，積累相關(guān)的短語(yǔ)和詞匯．