Question

【題目】書面表達。

周末到了，請為自己和家人制定一份健康而營養(yǎng)的早餐，并且說明理由。請根據(jù)要求，以A healthy breakfast標(biāo)題寫一篇60—80詞的短文。

要求：（1）說說家庭情況

（2）指出早餐的重要性

（3）說明為自己和家人所選擇的食物及其的原因。

Answer 1

【答案】

There are four people in my family, father, mother, my brother,Jack and I . My father is an English teacher in a middle school. My mother is a doctor. Jack and I are in the same school.

Breakfast is the most meal in a day. When we eat healthy breakfast, we can study better and not feel tired. If we don’t eat breakfast, we will feel unhappy and we can not easily concentrate on our study.

For breakfast, each of our family often eat s an egg, drink a cup of milk, and a piece of bread. I think it is healthy enough.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。主要介紹三方面的內(nèi)容，介紹自己家庭的基本情況；說明早餐的重要性； 介紹自己和家人為什么吃這些食物及原因。寫作時注意語言的連貫及通順。

寫作亮點：這篇短文內(nèi)容全面，以段落的形式把三方面的內(nèi)容進行描述，層次清晰。短文中用到了復(fù)合句：When we eat healthy breakfast, we can study better and not feel tired. If we don’t eat breakfast, we will feel unhappy and we can not easily concentrate on our study.給短文增色不少。