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【題目】假如你是Jack，打算參加一次英語演講比賽，主題是“夢想之家”。請根據(jù)要點(diǎn)寫一篇70

詞左右的演講稿，要求包含所有要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，語句通順，書寫整潔。 要點(diǎn)如下：

1. 有三個舒服的臥室和一個大書房；

2．房前有個大花園，花草遍地，每早都能聽到鳥兒在歌唱；

3．放學(xué)后，可請朋友們來家里玩，一起在陽臺上聊天。

Answer 1

【答案】Sample writing

Hi, everyone! My name is Jack. Today I want to tell you something about my dream home. It is very big and beautiful and I can live happily with my parents. In my dream home, there are three comfortable bedrooms and a big study with a computer and many books. There is a beautiful garden in front of my house with a lot of flowers and grass in it. I can even hear the birds sing every morning. After school, I can invite my friends to my home. We can talk happily about our school life and other things on the balcony. This is my dream home. I hope one day my dream can come true.

【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我的夢想之家。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：My name is……，It is……，there are……，There is……，I can……，I hope……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系.