Question

17．上周日是小梅奶奶的生日，下面介紹了小梅上周日的經(jīng)歷以及她的所感所想．請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給圖畫及文字提示，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇約100詞左右的短文．要求故事敘述完整，并簡(jiǎn)要陳述個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)．
參考詞匯：smart-phone n．智能手機(jī)  phubbers  n（pl．）．低頭族  face to face 面對(duì)面

經(jīng)歷
所感	容易引發(fā)交通事故，影響與家人，朋友的關(guān)系（relationship）對(duì)身心健康有害，不利于學(xué)習(xí)和工作
所想	正確利用手機(jī)，面對(duì)面交流勝過(guò)網(wǎng)上聊天

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Even worse，①when some people cross the street，they still ②concentrate on their mobile phones，③which can easily cause traffic accidents甚至更糟的是，當(dāng)一些人過(guò)馬路的時(shí)候他們?nèi)匀魂P(guān)注手機(jī)，那樣很容易引起交通事故．
①when引導(dǎo)的是時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句．
②concentrate on 專注于
③which引導(dǎo)的非限制定語(yǔ)從句，修飾前面的整個(gè)句子．
【高分句型二】
In my opinion，we'd better make good use of smart-phones依我看來(lái)，我們最好正確使用手機(jī)．
had better do sth 最好做某事
make use of使用…

解答 While eating with family members or getting together with friends，some are always busy playing with their mobile phones．It has bad effects on the relationship with their relatives and friends．Even worse，when some people cross the street，they still concentrate on their mobile phones，which can easily cause traffic accidents．【高分句型一】It's too dangerous．And others stay up playing games．I think it is really bad for their health，work and study．（經(jīng)歷和所感）
In my opinion，we'd better make good use of smart-phones．【高分句型二】Don't depend on them too much．And I do believe that face-to-face conversations will bring us more pleasure than chatting online．Let's raise our heads and refuse to be phubbers from now on!（所想）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱類作文最重要的是要把所有的要點(diǎn)都包括在內(nèi)，不能有遺漏或省略．本文所給要點(diǎn)不多，需要考生做較多的發(fā)揮，在寫作時(shí)，注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型，讓文章更有文采．