Question

【題目】書面表達

假如你的班上來了一位新同學，她的名字叫Kitty，她是“野生動物保護俱樂部（Wild Protection Club）”的一名志愿者，請你根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容寫一篇文章。

要求：1．包括所有要點，并做適當發(fā)揮。

2．條理清晰、字跡工整。詞數(shù)90詞左右。

Name	Kitty	Age	15	School	Sunshine Secondary School	Grade	8
Personality	kind, helpful, hard-working
Hobbies	do sports, travel, read books about all kinds of animals
Working experiences	take good care of homeless animals, raise money for Save China’s Pandas
Feeling(s)	…
Dream(s)	…

Answer 1

【答案】

Kitty

I have a new classmate. Her name is Kitty. She is 15 years old. She is a volunteer for Wild Protection Club. We are in Class1, Grade8 in Sunshine Secondary School. She is kind, helpful and hard-working. She often helps me with English. She likes doing sports, traveling and reading books about all kinds of animals. Once she took good care of homeless animals and raised money for Save China’s Pandas. She loves animals. Her dream is to be a vet in a animal hospital.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹自己班上來了一位新同學，她的名字叫Kitty，她是“野生動物保護俱樂部（Wild Protection Club）”的一名志愿者，請你根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容寫一篇文章。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，第三人稱進行敘述，表述時應注意全面，盡量將每個要點包括。注意主謂一致問題。句子結(jié)構主要為系表結(jié)構，注意一些常見句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系。

寫作亮點：這篇短文是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文，緊扣題材，用了所給材料的要點，包括所有要點，使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如： She often helps me with English.；She likes…；all kinds of； helps …with等。學習中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，讓文章更出彩，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，條理清晰、字跡工整，字數(shù)符合要求。