Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

作為中學(xué)生，我們學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)繁重。那么我們該不該幫父母做家務(wù)呢？針對(duì)這個(gè)問題，你們班的同學(xué)展開了一次討論。下表反映的是討論的結(jié)果，請你根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容寫一篇80詞左右的短文并給出你的想法。（文章開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）

寫作要求：1.語句連貫，詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。

2.根據(jù)上面的提示，盡可能用上上面所給信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

3.文中不要出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名。

Opinions	Amount	Reasons
Agree	35%	Help parents relax;develop life skills
Disgree	45%	(be) the parents’ job; (be)so busy study Studying; (be)dirty and boring to do chores
Don’t mind	20%	do chores when they are free

As middle school students, we have too much homework to do every day. Should we help our parents do chores at home? ________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

As middle school students, we have too much homework to do every day. Should we help our parents do chores at home?We have a discussion in our class.Here’s the result.About 30% of the students agree that we should help our parents do chores.They think doing chores can help parents relax.It can also develop their life skills.On the other hand,about 45% of the students think it is their parents’s job.As students,they have no time to do chores because they are busy study.Meanwhile,it’s dirty and boring to do chores.At the same time,about 20% of the students don’t mind doing chores at home.They do chores when they are free.In my opinion,no matter how busy we are,it’s necessary for us to do chores,because we can learn a lot from it.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇材料作文。所給材料內(nèi)容比較詳細(xì)，層次清楚，貼近學(xué)生生活，學(xué)生有話可寫。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真審題，深入挖掘題材內(nèi)涵，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。行文時(shí)要注意人稱、時(shí)態(tài)的搭配及主謂一致問題，同時(shí)注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點(diǎn)： 這篇短文涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。在文章的結(jié)構(gòu)組織上使用了簡單句和復(fù)合句，文章脈絡(luò)清晰，自然流暢。同時(shí)，文章還使用了一些常用的句式、短語和過度詞，這為文章增添了文采和層次感。