Question

11．近年來，隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的發(fā)展，結交網(wǎng)友成為中學生較為普遍的現(xiàn)象，請圍繞該話題用英語談談你的看法．
要求：（1）內(nèi)容包括 ①中學生結交網(wǎng)友的現(xiàn)狀．
②中學生結交網(wǎng)友的利與弊
③你對該現(xiàn)象的看法．
（2）字數(shù)：60-80詞．
（3）短文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名、學校名和地名．
Nowadays，more and more students like to make friends online．They like chatting with their friends，sending e-mails to each other，or even meeting them secretly．
I think making friends online has advantages and disadvantages．The internet can help students make more friends．They can know more try commumcating with each other and express their feelings to net pals instead of classmates．But it takes some students too much time to chat online．It's not good for their studies．Besides，some of them may get cheated．
In my opinion，as middle school students，we'd better not spend too much time making friends online．It's waste of time and it's kind of dangerous for teenagers．We should concentrate more on our studies．We can make friends with people around us．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是對結交網(wǎng)友這件事情談談看法．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從三個大的方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
①中學生結交網(wǎng)友的現(xiàn)狀．
②中學生結交網(wǎng)友的利與弊
③你對該現(xiàn)象的看法．

常用到的重點短語：
make friends 交朋友
chat with sb 和某人聊天
commumcate with sb與某人交流
it takes sb+時間+to do sth花費時間做某事
besides另外
had better do sth 最好做某事
in one's opinion依某人看來
concentrate  on專注于

高分句型：
Besides，some of them may get cheated．
besides表示另外，做插入語，引出下文．本句還有get+過去分詞表示被動．
In my opinion，as middle school students，we'd better not spend too much time making friends online．
in my opinion是插入語，引出下文自己的觀點，had better do sth的否定句，以及spend 時間+doing sth花費時間做某事．

解答 Nowadays，more and more students like to make friends online．They like chatting with their friends，sending e-mails to each other，or even meeting them secretly．（中學生結交網(wǎng)友的現(xiàn)狀）
I think making friends online has advantages and disadvantages．The internet can help students make more friends．They can know more to commumcate with each other and express their feelings to net pals instead of classmates．But it takes some students too much time to chat online．It's not good for their studies．Besides，some of them may get cheated．（高分句型）（中學生結交網(wǎng)友的利與弊）
In my opinion，as middle school students，we'd better not spend too much time making friends online．（高分句型）It's  waste of time and it's kind of dangerous for teenagers．（高分句型）We should concentrate more on our studies．We can make friends with people around us．（我的看法）

點評 以提綱提供情景的作文．要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語法規(guī)則的正確性，就不會造成審題不清而偏離主題，但要注意，文章必須覆蓋所提供的各個提綱的要點．行文間要注意簡化描述，用簡短的語句代替冗長的語句．在作文完成的時候，應該檢查、修改，以免遺漏一些需要表達清楚的要點和細節(jié)．