Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假如李家灣（Lijiawan）是對外開放單位，請用英語為來訪外賓寫一篇短文，介紹

該村的簡況。

要點(diǎn)如下：（詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右）

1. 李家灣遠(yuǎn)離城鎮(zhèn)，有2,000多人口；

2. 過去這里沒有工廠、學(xué)校,村民們（villagers）生活艱苦；

3. 1990年以來該村發(fā)生了很大的變化；

4. 現(xiàn)在村里已有兩家工廠和一所學(xué)校；

5. 村民們都住進(jìn)了新居,生活越來越好。

6. 這些變化給這個(gè)鎮(zhèn)帶來了優(yōu)勢，但也導(dǎo)致了很多問題。空氣污染比其它鎮(zhèn)多。

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Answer 1

【答案】

Lijiawan is far away from cities. There are two thousand people in it. There weren’t any factories or schools in the past. Villagers lived a hard life. The village has changed a lot since 1990. Now there are two factories and a school in the village. Villagers have moved into new houses. Their life is getting better and better. These changes have brought many advantages, but they have also caused many problems for people. There is more air pollution here than in any other town.

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于提綱類短文，話題是介紹李家灣村的簡況， 仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點(diǎn)。寫作時(shí)不要僅僅對要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文，一定要談?wù)勛约旱目捶�。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；語言表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的作文，本文很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)；應(yīng)用了我們熟悉的句型和短語There are two thousand people in it. / These changes have brought many advantages, but they have also caused many problems for people.等，語言表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確、句子通順、行文連貫。