Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)。

( 地震幸存者身心都受到了重創(chuàng)，急需社會(huì)的幫助。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一封80詞左右的倡議信，呼吁大家為地震幸存者獻(xiàn)出愛(ài)心，信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。)

提示：1. 一些地震幸存者受傷嚴(yán)重，急需盡快手術(shù)，但費(fèi)用高昂；

2. 一些地震幸存者失去了親人，感到孤獨(dú)，獨(dú)自生活對(duì)他們來(lái)說(shuō)很困難；

3. 我們可以捐出我們的零花錢，也可以擔(dān)當(dāng)醫(yī)院的志愿者；

4. 應(yīng)該多去拜訪他們讓他們感覺(jué)溫暖，我們應(yīng)該人人伸出援助之手，人多力量大。

Dear all,

Earthquake survivors need our help!

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Thanks a lot for your help!

Sun Yang

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear all,

Earthquake survivors need our help!

Some earthquake survivors were badly hurt in the earthquake. They need operations as soon as possible,but the operations cost a lot. Some survivors lost their family members. They feel lonely. It's hard for them to live alone. We can donate our pocket money and we can also work as volunteers in the hospital. We should visit them more often to make them feel warm. All of us should give a helping hand. Many hands make light work.

Thanks a lot for your help!

Sun Yang

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