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【題目】書面表達
21世紀報有個《心情巧克力》欄目，專門解答中學生的煩惱問題，欄目作家Meghan近來收到一封來信，請你根據(jù)這封來信的內(nèi)容，并替Meghan寫一封回信。
Dear Meghan:
I am really angry with my parents recently. Next Sunday is my birthday. My parents promised to buy a cell phone for me as my birthday present this year. But now when I ask about the birthday present they say they have changed their ideas, because they worry about my study if I get a new cell phone since the final exam is coming soon. They say a cell phone may take up too much of my time. But I think I can control myself, they just don't believe me. What's more, they broke their promise!
Liu Yang
請你根據(jù)來信內(nèi)容，寫一封回信。回信內(nèi)容要求:
1) 理解父母親的良苦用心:。他們出發(fā)點一定是為你好的。臨近畢業(yè)，學業(yè)為重。
2) 手機的確有很多好處，比如：查字典，聽音樂，查資料……但是也有不少危害，如使用不當，的確影響學習和生活。
3) 注意：以上信息不能遺漏，并適當發(fā)揮。但不要逐條翻譯中文提示。文章不能少于100個單詞。
Dear Liu Yang
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Answer 1

【答案】參考例文
Dear Liu Yang
We should understand the good intentions of parents:. They must have been for your own good. Close to graduation, our studies are important. There are many advantages of mobile phone, such as: check dictionaries, listen to music, check information...... But there are also a lot of harm, such as improper use, indeed affect the study and life.We should try our best to study hard and make great progress.
Meghan
【解析】本篇作文叫小作者根據(jù)作者的來信，寫封回信，小作者首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。要求介紹。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。小作者還必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。