Question

3．假如你是高一新生李華，在開學第一堂英語課上，用英語向大家作自我介紹：
    1．出生年月：1998年3月
    2．性格：
    3．愛好：
    4．特長：
    5．夢想：
注意：（1）詞數(shù)80詞左右；開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
     （2）覆蓋所有要點．結合個人情況適當發(fā)揮．
Hello，everyone!
  Myname is LiHua．I'm very glad to introduce myself to you．I was born in March 1998．My personality is more outgoing．I like to make friends with others，especially my classmates．I like
doing sports．Running is my favorite sport．So，I do best is to run it．I always remember that I was once a star of the class
running it．My dream is to become a teacher．I think，on the one hand，the teacher can achieve my teaching ideals，on the other
hand，I can also play with the kids，so I will be more happy．

Thankyou!

Answer 1

分析 本篇作文是一篇給出提綱的發(fā)言稿，內容是自我介紹，因此人稱應該用第一人稱I來寫，在介紹自己的出生年月時，用一般過去時；在介紹自己的喜好等情況時，用一般現(xiàn)在時；在談到自己的夢想時，用一般將來時或I want to do sth．等句型．
寫作思路及要點：本篇發(fā)言稿的寫作內容主要有：出生年月：1998年3月；性格；愛好；特長；夢想．給出的要點比較簡單，需要我們結合實際情況，寫出符合文章中心的句子．
重點句型及短語：
I'm very glad to introduce myself to you．我很高興給大家做自我介紹．
I was born in March 1998．我出生于1998年3月．
Running is my favorite sport．跑步是我最喜歡的運動．
My dream is to become a teacher．我的夢想是成為一名老師．
On the one hand…on the other hand，一方面…另一方面…
play with the kids  和孩子們玩

解答 Hello，everyone!
My name is Li Hua．I'm very glad to introduce myself to you．＜自我介紹的開場白＞
I was born in March 1998．My personality is more outgoing．I like to make friends with others，especially my classmates．＜自己的性格＞I like doing sports．Running is my favorite sport．So，I do best is to run it．I always remember that I was once a
star of the class running it．＜愛好與特長＞My dream is to become a teacher．I think，on the one hand，the teacher can achieve my teaching ideals，on the other hand，I can also play with the kids，so I will be more happy．＜夢想＞
Thank you!

點評 針對此類自我介紹的演講稿，在寫作時首先要注意把要點表述清楚，完整，確保不缺失要點；其次要注意表達的準確性，也就是語氣問題，注意演講常用的句式．