Question

【題目】假如你是Mike，你的朋友Jack由于長時間玩電腦游戲，現(xiàn)在頭痛、眼睛不舒服、腰背酸痛，并且睡不好覺。寫一信說明一下他的情況，并給出你對他的建議。

要求：（1）內(nèi)容包含所提供的信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

（2）書寫認(rèn)真，句子通順；

（3）詞數(shù)：60-80詞。

Dear Jack,

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Yours

Mike

Answer 1

【答案】I have a good friend ,his name is Jack ,he doesn't study hard but he spends long hours playing computer games ,and now his head hurts ,he can't see clearly ,and he has a sore back ,what's more he doesn't sleep well so I decided to give him some advice ,1. he shouldn't spend such a long time sitting before the computer in the same way for too long without moving 2.he should take more exercise and eat a healthy diet 3.he should go out to do some outdoor activities with friends ,if he does so ,I think he will get better soon .

【解析】試題分析：首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。要求介紹。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。檢查時必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇文章語言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯的文章。