Question

【題目】 書面表達（本大題共10分）

“五·一”即將來臨，你打算用以往攢下的零花錢(pocket money)給父母買一件禮物。

請以“A present for my parents”為題寫一篇文章。該文章必須包括一下內容：

1. 你送的禮物：一張健康俱樂部的貴賓卡；

2. 你父母的現(xiàn)狀：父親是教師，工作很辛苦；母親喜歡讀書，但缺乏運動；

3. 你送禮物的原因；

4. 該禮物對他們可能產生的影響和帶來的變化。

注意：

1. 文章應包括以上所有信息，要有適當的發(fā)揮。

2. 詞數：100左右。文章的開頭已經寫好，不記入總詞數。

3. 參考詞匯：

health club 健康俱樂部；a VIP card 一張貴賓卡

A present for my parents

May Day is coming and I want to give my parents a present. ……

Answer 1

【答案】

A present for my parents

May Day is coming and I want to give my parents a present. That is a VIP card of a health club. My father works hard as a teacher, spending most of his time at school. My mother and I sometimes accompany him in his office till a late hour. So I know that my father works with great effort. My mother loves reading and often dives into piles of books. But she seldom does exercise.

I want to give them this present to express my love and thanks to them. As I grow up, they are getting older. Both of them should exercise more but neither is doing enough. With the health club membership, I hope that they will find time to do more exercise.

I think that they will relax in the health club and make more friends. At the same time, I hope with more exercise, they will enjoy better health. What’s more, they could spend more time with each other together.

【解析】

試題分析：圍繞“五·一”即將來臨，作者用以往攢下的零花錢給父母買一件禮物，闡述禮物對他們可能產生的影響和帶來的變化。考生在寫作時要注意論點清晰及條理清楚。題目已給定大致的觀點，要注意漢譯英的正確性以及不要遺漏觀點，特別注意不要逐條翻譯。

寫作亮點：本篇文章句式的靈活多變。本文開篇第二句， My father works hard as a teacher, spending most of his time at school.本句用了一個較為高級的伴隨狀語，省略了主語；文章第二段第一句As I grow up, they are getting older.As引導的時間狀語從句；文章第二段倒數第一句With the health club membership, I hope that they will find time to do more exercise。With 的復合結構。還有諸多精彩的句子就不一一列舉里，這些都顯示了較好的英語功底。

本文主要從為什么送禮物，希望禮物能為他們帶來什么樣的改變來寫。然后用簡單的語言表達出來，既符合題目要求，又完整的概括了所有的觀點，是一篇較好的概要寫作。