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7．在過(guò)去的三年初中生活中，你肯定遇到了很多好老師，言愛(ài)學(xué)校英語(yǔ)廣播電臺(tái)開(kāi)展了"I love you，my English teacher"英語(yǔ)征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)和要求，寫(xiě)一封英語(yǔ)廣播稿．
寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1．中等身高，戴眼鏡，性格外向，善于交流；喜歡運(yùn)動(dòng)，經(jīng)常和同學(xué)們打籃球；
2．愛(ài)工作，嚴(yán)格對(duì)待和關(guān)愛(ài)每一個(gè)學(xué)生，幫助家庭有困難的學(xué)生；
3．課堂有趣充滿(mǎn)活力，經(jīng)常開(kāi)展豐富多彩活動(dòng)；課后幫助學(xué)困生，同學(xué)英語(yǔ)成績(jī)好．
參考詞匯：medium；outgoing；communicate；strict；care about；in trouble；colorful；Thanks to
寫(xiě)作要求：
1．詞數(shù)80-100（短文的開(kāi)始和結(jié)束語(yǔ)已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）
2．內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言流暢，不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3．短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名及校名．
I love you，my English teacherI have met many good teachers in the last three years．My English teacher，Mr．Huang is one of them．Now let me tell you something about him．       ．
I love you，my English teacher!I will never forget you forever!

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
He①is good at②communicating with others ③because he is outgoing．他善于與人溝通，因?yàn)樗�很外向�?br />①be good at擅長(zhǎng)…后跟名詞代詞或動(dòng)名詞
②communicate with sb與某人交流
③because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句
高分句型二：
His class is①so funny and exciting that all of us②fall in love with English．他的課是如此有趣和令人興奮，我們都愛(ài)上了英語(yǔ)．
①so…that如此，以至于，引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句；so后跟形容詞或副詞．
②fall in love with 愛(ài)上…

解答 I love you，my English teacherI have met many good teachers in the last three years．My English teacher，Mr．Huang is one of them．Now let me tell you something about him．Mr．Huang is of medium height and a little thin．He wears a pair of glasses．He is good at communicating with others because he is outgoing．【高分句型一】He likes sports．You can see him play basketball with us students after class．【對(duì)老師的外貌，性格及愛(ài)好介紹】
Mr．Huang enjoys his work．And he is a strict but caring teacher．He is very strict with us but cares about every student．When the students from poor families are in trouble，he is always ready to help them．【愛(ài)工作，嚴(yán)格對(duì)待和關(guān)愛(ài)每一個(gè)學(xué)生，幫助家庭有困難的學(xué)生】
I like my English teacher because he has many good ways to make our class lively and active．In his class，we often have different kinds of activities such as reading．competition and discussion．His class is so funny and exciting that all of us fall in love with English．【高分句型二】After class，he usually helps the students who have difficulties in learning English．Thanks to his hard work，we have improved our English a lot．【課堂有趣充滿(mǎn)活力，經(jīng)常開(kāi)展豐富多彩活動(dòng)；課后幫助學(xué)困生，同學(xué)英語(yǔ)成績(jī)好】
I love you，my English teacher!I will never forget you forever!

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．寫(xiě)作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第三人稱(chēng)，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述．語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣．適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．