Question

9．上個(gè)月，你們學(xué)校開(kāi)展了"文明規(guī)范月"活動(dòng)，活動(dòng)以來(lái)發(fā)生了很大變化．假如你是班長(zhǎng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面表格內(nèi)容提示，代表同學(xué)們進(jìn)行總結(jié)發(fā)言，總結(jié)你身邊同學(xué)的不同表現(xiàn)，同時(shí)發(fā)表自己的看法．

文  明  行  為		不  文  明  行  為
1．與老師、同學(xué)友好相處，見(jiàn)到老師問(wèn)好． 2．及時(shí)關(guān)好門窗、電燈． 3．幫助需要幫助的同學(xué)． 4．…		1．有些同學(xué)不注意環(huán)境衛(wèi)生，亂扔垃圾． 2．少數(shù)同學(xué)在公共場(chǎng)所喧嘩，無(wú)排隊(duì)習(xí)慣． 3．…
你的看法及對(duì)這種活動(dòng)的感受	…

要求：1表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；
2必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3 詞數(shù)不少于90，開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
How time flies!Great changes have taken place in our school since we took part in the civilized norms month activity．Now most of us can act better than before．                                  

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】Some of us are so careful that we often help close the windows or the doors or turn off the lights．一些人是如此的小心，經(jīng)常關(guān)好門窗、電燈．so…that如此…以至于，that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句．【高分句型二】
They are too impatient to wait in line他們太沒(méi)有耐心了，不會(huì)排隊(duì)等候．
too+adj/adv+to do sth太…而不能．

解答 How time flies!Great changes have taken place in our school since we took part in the civilized norms month activity．Now most of us can act better than before．We can get on well with our teachers and classmates．（與老師、同學(xué)友好相處，見(jiàn)到老師問(wèn)好）Some of us are so careful that we often help close the windows or the doors or turn off the lights．（及時(shí)關(guān)好門窗、電燈）【高分句型一】Some of us are kind enough to help the students in need．（幫助需要幫助的同學(xué)．）
Sadly，some of us pay no attention to what they are doing．For example，they care nothing about the environment．Sometimes they throw away rubbish here and there，and make a lot of noise in public．They are too impatient to wait in line．（有些同學(xué)不注意環(huán)境衛(wèi)生，亂扔垃圾，少數(shù)同學(xué)在公共場(chǎng)所喧嘩，無(wú)排隊(duì)習(xí)慣）【高分句型二】A few of us say bad words or quarrel with others．（和他人吵架）
In my opinion，as a student，we should act in a polite way．I hope we will have more activities like this．So we can learn more from these activities．I'm sure we can live happily if we try our best．（你的看法及對(duì)這種活動(dòng)的感受）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 表格式的作文，要點(diǎn)是一表格的形式出現(xiàn)，首先要研究表格，找出需要表達(dá)的要點(diǎn)，然后加以整合，也可以適當(dāng)增加使意思更連貫，但要點(diǎn)一定要全，不能漏掉．寫作時(shí)要注意遣詞造句，不能受漢語(yǔ)的影響，要用地道的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)，注意時(shí)態(tài)，語(yǔ)態(tài)，單詞拼寫，語(yǔ)法等問(wèn)題，用好簡(jiǎn)單句，適當(dāng)用復(fù)雜句．可以用一些高級(jí)詞匯．還要注意句子的關(guān)聯(lián)．另外這篇文章還有要求寫出自己的感受，這是開(kāi)放的部分，要學(xué)生自己展開(kāi)想象，組織語(yǔ)言，給出理由．