Question

介紹你自己，介紹你最要好的新同學以及最喜歡的新老師。寫出你及同學老師最有代表性的特征以及最喜歡的運動。（60詞左右）favourite ------最喜愛的

 

Answer 1

【答案】

                       

 My favorite teacher

My favorite classmate is Jim. He is 11 years old. He is tall and loves playing basketball. My favorite teacher is Miss Wang. And she is 24 years old. She is my English teacher. She is beautiful and kind. She likes playing table tennis every day. They love me and love them. We are very happy.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，敘述自己要好的同學及老師，還要介紹他們的特征及喜好的運動。,在寫作時要注意時態(tài)，人稱和固定詞組的搭配，要注意語言的規(guī)范性。結合材料可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱是單數(shù)第一人稱及第三人稱。寫作中適當使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系。

【亮點說明】

這篇短文使用了常用的句型，為文章增色不少.如: My favorite classmate is Jim.我最喜歡的同學是Jim, He is 11 years old.他11歲了，She likes playing table tennis every day.她喜歡每天打乒乓球。牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表更有邏輯性,更富有條理.

考點：話題作文。