Question

【題目】 書面表達.（20分）

假如Lucy 是新來的外教，她用中文簡單介紹了自己五年前和現(xiàn)在的一些情況，要求寫一篇介紹她的英語短文。請你根據以下表格內容提示，完成這篇短文。

要求 ：1.根據表格內容進行寫作，可適當發(fā)揮；運用所學短語used to;

2.提示詞：straight; curly; travel .

3. 80詞左右，短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。

	五年前	現(xiàn)在
外貌特征	胖，長卷發(fā)	瘦，短直發(fā)
性格	安靜，不愛說話	活躍，幽默
愛好	聽音樂	旅游
生活方式	經常吃快餐	在家自己做飯

Lucy is our new foreign teacher.She has changed a lot in the past five years.

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Lucy is our new foreign teacher. She has changed a lot in the past five years.

Five years ago, she was heavy and had long curly hair. But now she is thin and has short straight hair. As for her personality, she used to be quiet and did not like talking. Howerer, she is active and humorous now. She often makes us laugh in class. Lucy used to listen to music, but now she spends much of her free time travelling all over the world. She says it is exciting. In the past, she often ate fast food. Now, she loves to cook at home on her own. She thinks it is good for her health.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。要求介紹。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

寫作亮點：這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。如Lucy used to listen to music, but now she spends much of her free time travelling all over the world.等，but now等使文章的表達更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。