Question

【題目】書面表達（10分）

保持健康的體魄，擁有健康的生活方式，對我們每個人來說都是重要的。請以“How to Stay Healthy”為題，從健康飲食、體育鍛煉和養(yǎng)成良好的生活習慣等方面，寫一篇60—80詞左右的短文。要求內(nèi)容全面，表達正確、流暢。參考詞匯如下：

Such as; healthy food; fruits; vegetables; do some sports; good habits; wash hands; brush teeth; go to bed early; do not eat junk food….;

How to Stay Healthy

As we know, it is important for us keep healthy and have a healthy life. How to stay

healthy?

Answer 1

【答案】

How to stay healthy

As we know, it is important for us to keep healthy and have a healthy life．How to stay healthy? First, we should healthy food, such as apples, vegetables and so on．We mustn't eat junk food, which is bad for our health．Second, to do sports is necessary for us．We can run and play ball games．Last, it is useful for us to have a good living habbit．We should go to bed early and get up early．We must wash our hands before meals．What's more, we should brush our teeth twice a day．

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文給出了寫作的提綱，在寫作時要構(gòu)思好文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，注意要點一定齊全。句子要完整，表達準確，注意時態(tài)的變化和主謂一致。文中可適當使用一些連接詞來加強文章的邏輯性。

寫作亮點：這篇作文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰完整，表達準確流利，要點齊全。文中有一些好的表達方式如First, we should healthy food, such as apples, vegetables and so on．We mustn't eat junk food, which is bad for our health．等等。