Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

英語(yǔ)課上，同學(xué)們正在準(zhǔn)備舉行以“我最好的朋友”為話題的演講活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你以Tom的名義寫(xiě)一篇演講稿，向同學(xué)們介紹一下你最好的朋友。

要求：1、參考提示語(yǔ)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2、語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)工整；

3、文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)信息；

4、詞數(shù):不少于70詞；（開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。

要求：1.What does your friend look like?

2.How is he/she different from you?

3.Why do you like him/her?

Hello,everyone!

I am Tom and I am very happy to stand here to talk about my best friend____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Thanks for listening!

Answer 1

【答案】Hello,everyone!

I am Tom and I am very happy to stand here to talk about my best friend Lily. Lily is a Chinese girl. She is tall and has long straight hair. She is outgoing and always tells funny stories. She is different from me. I am a little serious. She likes music and dancing best, but I didn’t like them at first. She often sings and dances when we are together. Now I like music. She also tells stories to us and makes us laugh. When I am together with her, I will feel very happy. She is good at Chinese. I usually communicate with her in Chinese. I have improved my pronunciation.I am no longer afraid to speak Chinese, too. So friends needn't to be the same. Friends are like books—you don't need a lot of them as long as they are good.

Thanks for listening!

【解析】

這是一篇話題作文。以“我最好的朋友” 為話題寫(xiě)一篇演講稿。由于在要點(diǎn)中只給出了寫(xiě)作的大致方向，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多。動(dòng)筆前要圍繞主題組織材料，審清主題，確定時(shí)態(tài)主要詞匯等問(wèn)題。列出本文的寫(xiě)作提綱。寫(xiě)作中可適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意表達(dá)順序，表達(dá)要有條理性，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，要符合邏輯關(guān)系。寫(xiě)完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)、語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤（時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致等）。本文提綱：

大家好！

我叫湯姆，我很高興站在這里和談?wù)勎易詈玫呐笥牙蚶�。莉莉是個(gè)中國(guó)女孩。她個(gè)子高，頭發(fā)又長(zhǎng)又直。她很外向，總是講有趣的故事。她和我不一樣。我有點(diǎn)嚴(yán)肅。她最喜歡音樂(lè)和舞蹈，但起初我不喜歡他們。我們?cè)谝黄饡r(shí)，她經(jīng)常唱歌跳舞�，F(xiàn)在我有點(diǎn)喜歡音樂(lè)。她也給我們講故事，讓我們大笑。當(dāng)我和她在一起時(shí)，我會(huì)感到非常高興。她擅長(zhǎng)漢語(yǔ)。我通常用中文和她交流。我的發(fā)音已經(jīng)提高，我也不再害怕說(shuō)漢語(yǔ)了。所以朋友不必一樣。朋友就像書(shū)，只要他們好，你就不需要很多。

謝謝你的聆聽(tīng)！