Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

寬容是一種美德，人與人之間難免會有磕磕絆絆，面對矛盾，多一份包容和諒解，生活 就會多一縷陽光。請用英語寫一篇短文談?wù)勆�活中你原諒他人的一次�?jīng)歷，主要內(nèi)容包括: 你們之間發(fā)生了什么，你為什么原諒了對方，以及原諒對方之后的感受。字?jǐn)?shù)80字左右。 注意：不得出現(xiàn)真實的校名和人名。

提示詞語：forgive原諒

提示問題：What happened between you and him/her?

Why did you decide to forgive him/her?

How did you feel after forgiving him/her?

I still remember what happened between ...

Answer 1

【答案】I still remember what happened between my friend Mike and me. Two months ago, Mike invited me to go to a concert at seven o'clock. I got there on time. I waited for a long time, but Mike didn't show up in the end. I called him and asked him what happened. He forgot all about the concert. He was playing computer games at home at that time.

I got angry with Mike because he hurt my feelings. Mike also realized his mistake. He called me several times and said sorry to me. He even sent me a present to make me happy. Finally I forgave him. After forgiving him, I felt relaxed and happy.

【解析】

這是一篇話題作文，請用英語寫一篇短文談?wù)勆�活中你原諒他人的一次�?jīng)歷，主要內(nèi)容包括: 你們之間發(fā)生了什么，你為什么原諒了對方，以及原諒對方之后的感受。字?jǐn)?shù)80字左右。本文人稱主要第一人稱，時態(tài)主要是一般過去時。認(rèn)為閱讀材料，認(rèn)真審題，確定主題，認(rèn)真閱讀提示問題（1.What happened between you and him/her? 2.Why did you decide to forgive him/her? 3.How did you feel after forgiving him/her?4.I still remember what happened between ...），提示問題就是本文的提示要點，確定要點，根據(jù)要點適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，列出提綱。短文必須包含提示問題和提示詞。字?jǐn)?shù)應(yīng)在80詞左右。要運用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有連貫性。根據(jù)提示要點，列出本文的寫作提綱。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點、語法錯誤（時態(tài)、主謂一致等）。本文提綱：

我還記得我朋友邁克和我之間發(fā)生的事。兩個月前，邁克邀請我七點鐘去聽音樂會。我準(zhǔn)時到達(dá)那里。我等了很長時間，但邁克最終沒有出現(xiàn)。我打電話問他發(fā)生了什么事。他把音樂會的一切都忘了。那時他在家里玩電腦游戲。

我生邁克的氣是因為他傷害了我的感情。邁克也意識到了他的錯誤。他給我打了好幾次電話，向我道歉。他甚至送我一件禮物讓我開心。最后我原諒了他。原諒他之后，我感到輕松愉快。