Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)（15分）

假如你是張楠，你想和父母下個(gè)月旅行一周，但到底去什么地方，你和父母意見(jiàn)不同。請(qǐng)你給你的筆友李萍寫一封e-mail，以征求其意見(jiàn)。

內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：1.你想去海南三亞，你父母想去山東曲阜看孔子（Confucius）出生地；

2.發(fā)揮想象給出你與父母各自的理由；

3. 請(qǐng)李萍給出建議。

要求：1.可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.80詞左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Li Ping，

Write to me soon. Thank you!

Yours，

Zhang Lei

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Li Ping，

I want to take a one-week trip with my parents next week. I’d like to go to a place where there are a lot of things to do and lots of sights to see. So I hope to go to Sanya， Hainan. I don’t mind the weather is hot. But my parents would like to visit Qufu in Shandong. They said it’s the place where Confucius was born and it’s an educational place. We haven’t decided yet where to go. Where do you think we should go? Could you please give me some advice?

Write to me soon. Thank you!

Yours，

Zhang Lei

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文給出了寫作的提綱，在寫作時(shí)要構(gòu)思好文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，注意要點(diǎn)一定齊全。句子要完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，注意時(shí)態(tài)的變化和主謂一致。文中可適當(dāng)使用一些連接詞來(lái)加強(qiáng)文章的邏輯性。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇作文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確流利，要點(diǎn)齊全。文中有一些好的表達(dá)方式如I’d like to go to a place where there are a lot of things to do and lots of sights to see. They said it’s the place where Confucius was born and it’s an educational place.等等。