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16．健康對(duì)每個(gè)人都非常重要，但許多中學(xué)生對(duì)此缺乏認(rèn)識(shí)，為了讓你的同學(xué)更多的了解這方面的知識(shí)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖示，以"How can we keep healthy？"為題寫一篇短文．
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How can we keep healthy？
Good health is very important for everyone，but most of us don't know how to keep fit．                                                                

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
First，it's necessary to have a good eating habit．首先，必須要有一個(gè)好的飲食習(xí)慣．
it is+adj+to do sth對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)做某事是怎么樣的，it是形式主語(yǔ)，動(dòng)詞不定式做真正主語(yǔ)．
【高分句型二】
If we try our best，we will be very healthy．如果我們盡力，我們就會(huì)很健康．
if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句，遵循主將從現(xiàn)的規(guī)則．

解答 How can we keep healthy？
Good health is very important for everyone，but most of us don't know how to keep fit．First，it's necessary to have a good eating habit．【高分句型一】We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat every day．We can't eat too much or too little．（健康飲食）Second，we should exercise often to build us up．Try to exercise for half an hour，you can do it twice or three times every week．Doing exercise can help make us strong．（參加運(yùn)動(dòng)，強(qiáng)身健體）Third，Staying up at night is bad for our health．If we can't get enough sleep，we may have a headache．（早睡早起，不熬夜）Fourth，try to be happy，because happiness is important for our health，it's the best medicine．（保持好心情，笑對(duì)生活）Finally，we must go to see a doctor when we get ill．    
  If we try our best，we will be very healthy．【高分句型二】

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