Question

10．近年來(lái)，中小學(xué)生的健康問(wèn)題日益引起人們的關(guān)注．請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)就該問(wèn)題談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ?br />

常見(jiàn)中小學(xué)生健康問(wèn)題

1．不重視健康問(wèn)題；2．不吃早餐；3．常常看電視、玩電腦；4．有許多中學(xué)生不想運(yùn)動(dòng)；5．不與家人交流溝通；=6．有些男孩認(rèn)為抽煙喝酒很酷；…

提示詞：pay attention to（注意），communicate（交流）
要求：
1．陳述常見(jiàn)中小學(xué)生健康問(wèn)題，談?wù)勗鯓硬拍鼙３纸】担?br />2．所給提示詞須用上，詞數(shù)80詞左右
3．短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、學(xué)校名和地名．
Everyone wants to keep healthy today．               ．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是陳述常見(jiàn)中小學(xué)生健康問(wèn)題，談?wù)勗鯓硬拍鼙３纸】担畷r(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1常見(jiàn)中小學(xué)生健康問(wèn)題：①．不重視健康問(wèn)題；②．不吃早餐；③．常常看電視、玩電腦；④．有許多中學(xué)生不想運(yùn)動(dòng)；⑤．不與家人交流溝通；⑥．有些男孩認(rèn)為抽煙喝酒很酷
2怎樣才能保持健康；
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
pay attention to 關(guān)注
communicate with sb 與某人交流
have a rest 休息
take part in 參加
【高分句型】
1．Some of us go to school without breakfast in the morning．
without介詞，沒(méi)有…，后加名詞代詞或動(dòng)名詞．
2．Many boys think①②it is cool to drink or smoke．
①think 后是省略了引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語(yǔ)從句
②it是形式主語(yǔ)，動(dòng)詞不定式是真正主語(yǔ)．
3．It is important for us to have good habits．
it is+adj+for sb+to do sth．對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)做某事是怎么樣的．it是形式主語(yǔ)，動(dòng)詞不定式是真正主語(yǔ)．

解答 Everyone wants to keep healthy today．But we students don't pay attention to our health．（不重視健康問(wèn)題）Some of us go to school without breakfast in the morning．【高分句型】（不吃早餐）Some students play computer games or watch TV too much，especially on weekends．（常�？措娨�、玩電腦）They don't want to do sports or communicate with their family members．（有許多中學(xué)生不想運(yùn)動(dòng)，不與家人交流溝通）Many boys think it is cool to drink or smoke．【高分句型】（有些男孩認(rèn)為抽煙喝酒很酷）
It is important for us to have good habits．【高分句型】We should eat breakfast every morning．We can watch TV or play computer games for a short time，and then have a rest．We can also take part in some outdoor activities with our parents or friends．We should always keep communicate with the people around us．I think it is necessary for us to keep healthy．（怎樣才能保持健康）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這篇作文給出了寫(xiě)作的提綱，在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要構(gòu)思好文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，注意要點(diǎn)一定齊全．句子要完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，注意時(shí)態(tài)的變化和主謂一致．文中可適當(dāng)使用一些連接詞來(lái)加強(qiáng)文章的邏輯性．寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：這篇作文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確流利，要點(diǎn)齊全．文中有一些好的表達(dá)方式如Some students play computer games or watch TV too much，especially on weekends．They don't want to do sports or communicate with their family members．等等