Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

隨著陽(yáng)光體育運(yùn)動(dòng)在全國(guó)的推廣，校園里出現(xiàn)了可喜的變化：運(yùn)動(dòng)時(shí)間延長(zhǎng)了，學(xué)生體質(zhì)增強(qiáng)了，校園生活豐富了。請(qǐng)以“Sports in Our School”為題給校刊寫一篇報(bào)道。

內(nèi)容提示：1. time of sports

2. kinds of sports

3. change of students’ health and study

4. change of school life

要求：1. 句子通順，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，可適當(dāng)自由發(fā)揮，內(nèi)容健康。

2. 詞數(shù)：不少于80詞。

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Answer 1

【答案】Sports in Our School

Sports in our school have changed a lot. Now we have more than three P.E. classes a week, and we have at least one hour to exercise every day

Students get so excited at these changes. More and more students take part in the ball games, running and jumping on the playground. Our school life is becoming more colorful and wonderful.

Doing sports is also a good way to relax and keep fit. What's more, a healthy body can help us study better and live a happier life.

【解析】

這篇作文要求我們以Sports in Our School為題，給�？瘜懸黄恼拢v述一下隨著陽(yáng)光體育運(yùn)動(dòng)在全國(guó)的推廣，校園里出現(xiàn)了可喜的變化。題目中只有簡(jiǎn)短的內(nèi)容提示，寫作時(shí)，應(yīng)將這些內(nèi)容進(jìn)行充實(shí)、發(fā)揮，增加一些細(xì)節(jié)，使他們成為一篇完整的短文。寫作前，應(yīng)仔細(xì)審題，確定文章的中心和主體，以及短文中應(yīng)使用的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱等。通過(guò)分析可知，這篇短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，根據(jù)表示需要確定適當(dāng)?shù)娜朔Q。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意分清段落和層次，使中心突出，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。表達(dá)中應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，寫漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)。應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，寫完整的句子，如可以用較常見(jiàn)的主謂賓或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)，使表達(dá)簡(jiǎn)潔、明了。為提升文章水平，可以穿插使用并列句、復(fù)合句、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞等復(fù)雜句式。同時(shí)注意語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫。