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周華遠在汶川地震災區(qū)的筆友王強失去父母、同學后很傷心,請你以周華的名義寫一封信給他,鼓勵他振作起來。

要求:1.必須用上所有提示詞,可適當發(fā)揮;

2.詞數要求:6080。開頭、結尾已給出,不計入總詞數。

提示詞:

提示詞:lose one's life, be brave, talk with, get help from, sleep well, take exercise, relax yourself, smile at life Dear Wang Qiang,

I'm sorry to hear that a strong earthquake happened in Wenchuan________

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Dear Wang Qiang,

  I'm sorry to hear that a strong earthquake happened in WenchuanWhen I knew that your parents and some of your classmates lost their lives, I felt very sadI think you should be braveYou can talk with your friends or teachersMaybe you can get help from themIt's also important for you to sleep wellYou'd better take exercise every dayYou should learn how to relax yourselfTake good care of yourself and smile at life!

Yours, Zhou Hua

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  第五檔910分 能寫出全部要點,行文連貫,語言基本無誤,完全達到寫作要求。

  第四檔78分 能寫出全部要點,行文基本連貫,語言有少量錯誤,基本達到寫作要求。

  第三檔56分 能寫出大部分要點,語言雖有較多錯誤,尚能達意。

  第二檔34分 能寫出基本要點,語言錯誤多,未達到寫作要求。

  第一檔02分 只寫出一、二個句子,語言錯誤多。

  0分 未表達任何與本題內容有關的信息,只字未寫或抄下提示詞。


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     周華遠在汶川地震災區(qū)的筆友王強失去父母、同學后很傷心,請你以周華的名義寫一封信給他,
鼓勵他振作起來。
     要求:
     1. 必須用上所有提示詞,可適當發(fā)揮;
     2. 詞數要求:60~80。開頭、結尾已給出,不計入總詞數。
     提示詞:lose one's life, be brave, talk with, get help from, sleep well, 
                   take exercise, relax yourself, smile at life

Dear Wang Qiang,
     I'm sorry to hear that a strong earthquake happened in Wenchuan. ____________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________

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