Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)（滿分15分）

根據(jù)提示寫一篇80－100字的短文。

假設(shè)你叫張琳，你班李華同學(xué)擬參加學(xué)校新一屆學(xué)生會主席競選，你認(rèn)為他具有所有成為優(yōu)秀學(xué)生會主席的個人品質(zhì)，決定投票給他，寫一封推薦信介紹他的情況。字?jǐn)?shù)不少于100。

姓名	星座	最喜歡的顏色	愛好	品質(zhì)
李華，一名九年級學(xué)生	1994年2月23日出生	綠色 給他能量 代表著新生命和成長	酷愛籃球，擅長繪畫，經(jīng)常為學(xué)生會做額外工作。	慷慨；勤奮；做事鍥而不舍；富有創(chuàng)造力和想象力，能夠提出一些新觀點；組織能力強

Dear Sir or Madam:

I’m writing to recommend my classmate Li Hua as the new chairperson of the Students’ Union.

I think Li Hua has all the personal qualities to be an excellent chairperson. I’ll vote for him. I hope you can agree with me.

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Yours sincerely

Zhang Lin

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir or Madam:

I’m writing to recommend my classmate Li Hua as the new chairperson of the Students’ Union. Li Hua was born on February 23th, 1994. His star sign is Pisces. He’s generous, kind, easy-going and modest. He works very hard. His favourite color is green and he thinks green can give him energy,as it is the color of nature and represents new life and growth. As a Grade9 student, although sometimes he has to stay up late to complete his homework, he’s so energetic that he won’t mind doing extra work for the Students’ Union. He’s crazy about playing basketball. He’s creative and imaginative enough to come up with new ideas. He never gives up easily. He’s more organized than any other student in our class.

I think Li Hua has all the personal qualities to be an excellent chairperson. I’ll vote for him. I hope you can agree with me.

Yours sincerely

Zhang Lin

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。運用適當(dāng)?shù)亩陶Z表達(dá)中心思想，增加作文的可讀性。完成提示詞時也要符合事實。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等。

寫作亮點：這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。